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Drawing of Hawkeye from FMA. Made it when I was bored a few weeks ago.

It didnt come out quite the way I wanted it to though.... :movingon: something about it just isnt right.... If you can tell me whats wrong with it, I'd appreciate it :pray:

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:iconultimega:
I can't put my finger on it, but I think its great... (maybe we should hire the Scooby-Doo Detective Agency, lol) @(,@;

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:iconultimega:
"Jenkies! It's the creepy Janitor that's missing" "Like, zoinks!!"... :rofl:

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:iconjohndeer91:
It's very nice!

...the eyes... they are too small. And I think... her bangs might be too low.. I'm no expert though! ^^;

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And the rain fell as if the ocean and the sky switched places that night, relying on the clouds to filter the water into a heavy shower, instead of an absolutely drowning.
:iconsenseialicia:
Im not sure either.. i think it looks great... maybe the mouth and nose are a tinsy bit low?? but i think its fine!! great job

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:iconfreaky-eye-kakashi:
it's in the eyes.. the space between the two is a bit too far.. ^-^"
gomen.. but you asked for it.. ^-^"

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:icond88:
looks very good, and just as good as the show.

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:iconteramaster:
Great pic! Nice job!

I never watched FMA, but I think the eyes and the ear might be a bit too small. The rest is great!

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:iconliv4themoments:
But its not great though. I wanted it too be really good, but yet again I've failed

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